Cjross313's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[PreLoader Tutorial]

Thanks

I didn't use the mask thing, but a movie clip of just a bar with 100 frames growing larger. It's also easier to paste this into your games, you don't even have to mess with frames! 7/10, the code is easy, but your method of making the bar is a little much.

[Uber Space Shooter]

Sweet.

This game is challenging, and fun. The final boss uses gravity, use the big projectiles on the final boss, as they will be pulled in by gravity.(I didn't beat him, but I know that's how you do it.) 8/10, as you didn't clarify what everything does.

[-Evade-]

Nice game

Wow, this game is really good. first game, huh? Are the levels pre-designed or are they random? Man, I wish my first game was as good as this. =( 8/10 becuase this is a good first.

Tolomus responds:

The levels are random:)

Thanks for the review!

[Shape Defense]

Eh...

You need to trace the cannon image, A triangle when right past me and restarted the level. You also need to make it so the shapes don't just go from one direction. I can just leave the cannon pointed in one direction and click. 5/10.

DavidWestfallFlash responds:

I didn't notice anything about losing like that, but there may be some problems, and you just didn't get far enough for the shapes to come from the other directions.

[Crumbled]

Creative, original.

It has a good gaming concept, but the levels are too easy. make it with more of a challenge and this will be a great game.

[Actionscript Tutorial.]

Thank You.

This tutorial is really helpful for me. I now know how to add gravity to games. I am still learning, but I skimmed over it and give it a 10.

Now, Someone needs to write a tutorial about networking in flash. =)
(Starts looking through flash help files.)

[Animated Preloaders]

Thank you.

Thanks to you, I have just created my new singature pre-loader.(If you see any of my games with it, don't ask what it is a picture of. that is a suprise =])

I would say that you need to clarify a little bit more, perhaps showing images of what to do? I figured it out only after the third time that I read it. I give it an 8 overall, as it is very useful, but you have to do some thinking to figure it out.

[.: Skyfaller :.]

Kind of fun...

It's a bit simplistic. You should make different colors to represent the different power-ups. you should also make more missles go at one time. it's too easy to dodge. 5/10.

[RPG Platformer Tutorial]

Half good.

Only the jumping part of the tutorial works for me. You should explain the inventory part better. Since only half of the tutorial works, you get a 5/10.